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NO

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"Can I have a puppy?"
"No."
"Can I pick flowers from the garden?"
"No."
"Can I climb the trees in the front yard?"
"No."

Do you ever believe your parents
Whenever they say it?
Do you ever believe that one special someone
When they say it, voice deadpan as always?
Does no ever really have the meaning
We all tend to give it?
Does no really mean no
Or just not today?
I hope it does because you said no
when I asked "Do you love me?"
i wrote this back in 8th grade. i was once again going through my files and that ultimately means finding something dev-worthy. it had a different ending, and i didn't like the feel that it gave, so i modified it. hope you enjoy and sorry for the temporary lapse of me. i must've lost my muse... i'm ripping off poems from myself 2 years ago..

~BMF

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does no really mean no
or just not today?
i hope it does because you said no
when i asked if you love me.


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preview picture courtesy of *kittynn
don't want to be acting like its mine when its totally not. and i love her work...

please don't kill me
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AsheEllwood's avatar
I can totally relate. Good work :)